Hi y’all!
This post isn’t going to be very cheerful since it is a poem to my grandmother, whom I lost, two years ago. She passed away due to cancer, and I miss her :c
The poem does contain some BTS song references. So I’mma state that before anyone tells me I’ve copied. I just used to references in a different way, I hope you understand 😀
Don’t forget to stick till the end for a surprise!
Also this is a collab with Saumya from Draw-Write-Inspire! She is a very sweet person, and helped me decide on the topic! Thank you Saumya! Don’t forget to check her post! You will find it linked here.
I don’t think this poem actually makes you feel how I felt. But I hope you still read it 🖤
So let’s see what Geet has for you, shall we?
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Everything starts to lose its place
When you loose someone you can’t replace
You feel sad, and everything’s blue,
Has it happened to you? It happened to me too.
It’s hard, writing this,
‘Cause I have someone I truly miss.
My grandmother, so kind, so selfless,
Always having my back, clearing all my mess.
Taught me a lot, she really did,
My favourite person as a kid.
She passed away due to cancer, it’s really sad.
Why? It makes me mad.
I hope she’s in a better place,
And she’s the one I couldn’t replace.
This poem, I know, doesn’t make you feel,
Whatever this is, it’s fricking real.
Questions in my head, it’s turned grey,
Granny, why couldn’t you just stay?
I should have spent more time,
I feel like I’ve committed a crime,
Should have made more memories with you,
Don’t you think so too?
Are you reading this? Are you still there?
I miss your love and care.
I miss your presence, scent, and so much more
You were one in a crore.
I’m sorry, I can’t help it,
Now I just have a photo of you to deal with.
Caught in a frame, a precious memory,
Do you feel how much you meant to me?
You left me, but I never stopped thinking about you,
Not even a day, not even two.
Your last words to me,
“Go study,”
I will, don’t you worry,
And that can wait, don’t you hurry,
Last question-
Do you remember me?
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Aah okay, I hope no one is crying. I know it isn’t the best poem ever.
So a part of our collabs was making a sign-off for each other, you can go check the sign off I made for Saumya on her blog! And you’ll find the one she made for me below!
Take care, stay safe, drink enough water and get some rest if you have to!
You can fill this form out – https://forms.gle/Zkn6twvU9Baq5xfP8
Wanna chat in the comments? Sure! I love talking to, bring out any random topics in the comments y’all!
Byeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
❤
Wow I can’t help I had not liked this post😂
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😂 Now you did
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This poem is sooo beautiful Geet!! 😊😊❤️ I do miss my grandfather…. I so agree these lines with u
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Aww may he rest in peace!
Thank you 🤍
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🥺❤️
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Beautiful, that last line! ❤
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Thank you! For checking this blog out, reading the poetry and following me! It means so much to me 💕
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Wow! this is a very good poem and it speaks a lot of words!!
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Thanks Betty!
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I’ve nominated you for a contest. Do check it out!
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This is awesome guys!!
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Thank you!!
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Hi, Lili! I’m Chloe, found you from Saumya’s blog, and came over to check out your poem!
I’ve had losses too and I’ve always wondered that same question.
Don’t worry, your grandma is in a wonderful place, and you’ll get to be with her again someday. 😁
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Aww thanks for taking the effort to check this blog out!
Oouh I understand :c
I hope so 🤧
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🙂
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It was really touching Lili.
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Thank you Poorwa 💕
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aw.. this is so sad. 🥺💕
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😭🤧🥺
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Aww… 🙂 That’s sweet.
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Ty Greg!
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Beautifully penned
Very touching
Prayers for your grandma
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Thank you Akshita 😔
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a great collab here with saumya and great poem writing and well thought and expressed in lines if you are interested in novels visit my blog for some epic ones and follow the blog and read the novels
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thanks! oh sure i’ll check it out-
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Wowww..! Such a marvelous Collab..! So lovely and heart breaking piece..! Loved it very much..!😊🤗
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Thank you Filarance!
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My pleasure dear lili..!
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This poem is amazing Geet. All the love to your Grandmother.
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Thank you 🤧
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Wow… I literally choking up right now
Im really sorry, I thankfully have not been in this position…
U have got some talent Lili!
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Aw *hugs you*
I hope you never be…it’s very sad and painful 😔
Doesn’t everyone have some or the other talent? Tysm 💕
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*hugs you back* hope you always find the light through the dark!
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It was a touching poem 🥺👌🏻
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Aww ty 💕
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😊
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I’m sorry about your loss, she seemed like a very gentle soul.
I’m crying 🥺😢this is so emotional lili!
I can’t wait to read more from you.
~divi
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She was 😔
Aww don’t cry please </3
Of course! I'll write more…:D
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Oh my word you brought tears to my eyes 😭 but the poem was gorgeous you are very talented! ✨💗
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Thank you so much!
WordPress put this comment into spam, I’m sorry 👀
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Aww no worries sometimes WordPress does that but glad you got it 😇
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Oh my word you brought tears to my eyes 😭 gorgeous poem though you are very talented✨💗
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T_T
You know I cry very easily right?
Lili, this poem was so touching and heart breaking… its incredible how you can express your emotions through poetry
Beautifully written, Keep Writing more wonderful poems 😀
I too hope that your grandma is having a peaceful life in another place~ 🙏🎗
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I told you, don’t cry 🥺
Thank you Sid <33
Yes, I'll write, of course!
😦
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That was an emotional read! I am sorry you lost your grandma to cancer, I lost mine too a few years back and I really wish I would’ve taken more time out to get to know her better!💕
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Awh :c
Me too, I felt like I should have spent more time with her 🤧
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